Saturday, July 5, 2008

This is a very good poam i wrote for the talent show on the cruise called The Cruise Ship Adventure

I got on a boat,they put me in a vest
I was burning up, i just wanted rest
We went to a fancy restaurant, to eat a fancy dinner

And when we came back, i felt like such a winner
On the bed was a towel made pig
I took his picture and named him  Jig
And as he sat upon that bed 
Tiffany knocked off his head

The next day, we went to Key West
And it was hard to act my best
I was hot and wanted rest

After my nap and fancy meal 
I came back to another towel deal
An eskimo whose head stayed on 
As i was dressed like going to prom

In Mexico i rode a dolphin
It was much better than miniature golfin
Today is the last day at sea
I will miss the cruise 
Will the cruise miss me 

i hope you liked it if you know any one that publishes books show them my poem please thanks

3 comments:

rebeccaV said...

That is a great poem Valerie!! You are really talented!

Leslie said...

Bravo!! You're a very creative girl!

Valerie said...

thank you everyone